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2020 Paper Team Mentorship V – “The Pirate King” Revised Draft (PT204)

January 18, 2021

Alex and Nick continue the 2020 Paper Team Mentorship with mentee Ben Warner, and the revised draft of his drama pilot THE PIRATE KING.

Step five of the process: revising the first draft of the original pilot.

We share our thoughts on Ben's revised draft.

Content
2020 Mentorship recap (00:00:45)
Discussion of "The Pirate King" revised draft (00:02:05)

Links
"The Pirate King" revised draft
2020 Paper Team Mentorship I - "The Pirate King" Overview (PT190)
2020 Paper Team Mentorship I - Ben's Update
2020 Paper Team Mentorship II - "The Pirate King" Beat Sheet (PT193)
2020 Paper Team Mentorship II - Ben's Update
2020 Paper Team Mentorship III – “The Pirate King” Outline (PT198)
2020 Paper Team Mentorship III - Ben's Update
2020 Paper Team Mentorship IV - "The Pirate King" First Draft (PT201)
2020 Paper Team Mentorship IV - Ben's Update

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