The Adventures of Indiana Jim

The Adventures of Indiana Jim


I Deleted the Sex Scene – NaNoWriMo Day 6

November 06, 2020

Day 6: 849 new words, 114 net gain
Total: 8,260 words
Yes, I cut the sex scene because it was an obvious tonal mismatch with the voice of the piece. This discussion is about the difference between an obvious cut and self-editing or tweaking your prose or tinkering with the plot.